Elevator Pitch No. 2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lZOKtwGwiqg&t=8s
In this Elevator Pitch I moved outside to show my neighbors home still showing the major damage Hurricane Michael cause. My hope is that this would have a dramatic effect on the viewer.
The feedback that I received was very positive but I did receive a recommendation to be a little more enthusiastic. This is very hard to do in my case because I was so personally affected by the Hurricane myself. My hope is through additional practice I will be able to interject some enthusiasm into my elevator pitch.
Stay tuned for No. 3
In this Elevator Pitch I moved outside to show my neighbors home still showing the major damage Hurricane Michael cause. My hope is that this would have a dramatic effect on the viewer.
The feedback that I received was very positive but I did receive a recommendation to be a little more enthusiastic. This is very hard to do in my case because I was so personally affected by the Hurricane myself. My hope is through additional practice I will be able to interject some enthusiasm into my elevator pitch.
Stay tuned for No. 3
Hi Shannon, I really enjoyed watching your sales pitch. I think you managed to deliver a really great sales pitch. I liked how you moved outside to help the audience visualize the damages caused during hurricanes and thereby helping you to put your point forward more strongly. Also your pitch showed a lot of confidence and showed that you were well prepared for it. Overall, great work!
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